I’ve been thinking a lot lately about details.
Breaking Bad is over, and if ever there
was a show that paid attention to detail it was that one, from those ominous skull-tipped boots to the pink teddy bear with the missing eye that lands in
Walt’s swimming pool.
After the finale I listened to Anna Gunn on Talking Bad compliment Vince Gilligan
for the care he took in incorporating minute detail into every scene he
directed. It occurred to me that detail can make the difference in how we as
readers or viewers believe in a scene.
In her book Reading Like a Writer, Francine Prose has an excellent chapter on detail. “Details
are what persuade us that someone is telling the truth,” she writes. It’s that
one perfect detail that will nail a scene – the equivalent to Flaubert’s mot juste.
But if God is in the details, remember there’s a flipside to that saying: the devil is in them, too.
The wrong details in a scene will leave your reader scratching his or her head
in confusion. And perish the thought of the anachronistic detail – your reader
might throw the book across the room. A
lack of detail creates vagueness and might send the message to your reader that
you have not fully imagined your scene.
In terms of characterization, the well-chosen detail – or,
as New Zealand novelist Maurice Shadbolt calls it, the “precious particle” –
can serve as a brilliant shorthand to nail a character even more effectively
than long description would. If you want to go back to Breaking Bad (and I know
you do), think of Bogdan’s eyebrows, Marie’s penchant for purple, Todd’s
ringtone, Hector Salamanca’s bell. Notice that these are not particularly extreme
(okay, maybe Bogdan’s eyebrows are extreme). But they’re memorable.
If the right detail makes a scene, too much detail can kill
it. It’s a little like interior design. Tastefully done, it works. But too many
paintings combined with too many frilled lampshades and embroidered cushions –
and you cross the line into kitsch.
So how do you find that perfect detail, the one that makes
your scene live for the reader? That’s the million-dollar question. I find the simple exercise of closing my eyes
and engaging all of my senses, being fully in the scene, can help. I also find that my worst enemy is
abstraction. Don’t say the room was a mess, or the attic stunk, or the shirt
was ugly. The more specific you can be, the more your scene will come to life.
Probably the most helpful advice I’ve received?
Pay attention. To everything. And write it down. You’ll be
surprised at the tiny details that come creeping into your scenes from real
life.
Happy writing!
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